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Fundamental fissures open endlessly spilling rain deeply where the heat is. A blank white room with a steady drip for a clock is the one to avoid when the diversions are used up. Busy lives, busy lies weave a door that seals illusions to my soul. The backward glance as from a precipice over a void. entices not to fall but to float. Does missing my father cause the loneliness or point out the singular journey.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/2/2016 8:38:00 AM
Congrats Charles, for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 5/18/2016 12:48:00 AM
Charles, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:43:00 AM
Glad to see you on the Soup, my friend, and an insightful first poem, but I've come to expect that of you. Now others will see, too.
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Date: 5/16/2016 1:21:00 AM
Charles, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 5/15/2016 11:37:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Charles. :)
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:41:00 PM
Charles,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ FA
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