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Have you ever reached that line that dead end of hope? that seem to be the only hope That line is where am traveling on a point where future seems like a million years away But that line is slacking now Have you ever reached that line? tell me please i need to know! Have you ever reached that line where all dreams lead to a single path and that path seem to have faded away tell me please i need to know! I have gotten to that point and every hope left of me is around a tiny rope will it lead me to my Canaan land? Has anyone being to this point tell me please i need to know! cos all i have left is a tiny rope of hope wrapped around my battered palm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/6/2016 9:33:00 AM
AO, I can relate to your poem very much, I have been cast down into the deepest pits many times in my life and had to crawl to the top and stand tall, never ever give up hope, great write, 7 ~
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 4/6/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thanks a lot BW...*hugs and smiles.~AO
Date: 4/5/2016 5:51:00 PM
With faith and prayer all our desire shall reach our palms. Keep hoping friend.....pleasure meeting you..I look forward to read more of your gem.....stay blessed...........A.M.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 4/6/2016 12:28:00 PM
It was a pleasure meeting you too...thanks for reading (and keeping tab of the time for me)...*winks and hugs*. AO
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/5/2016 5:54:00 PM
Mind you, it's almost mid night, de-sleep (unrest) do affect body. Good night!

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