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Lost

This is a such sad place. I reach out for my love. But I can't find him. Where are you my darling? I think I'm losing my mind. I'm stuck in a place that doesn't exist. It's in between reality and a dream. I'm lost without you my love. Inspired by Broken Wings "lost" contest 2-4-16

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Date: 6/7/2022 4:10:00 PM
This was sad but very true on so many levels. I enjoyed reading every word. Ann
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Date: 2/5/2016 5:10:00 PM
Alexis, the shape of this poem is fitting to its narrow existence in that place that doesn't exist. Well done.
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Date: 2/5/2016 12:20:00 PM
I can feel the emotion in every word Alexis such a sad portrayal of 'lost':-( hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 2/5/2016 12:19:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 2/5/2016 11:17:00 AM
Such emotion in your lines, dear....such angst. Lovely poem....though sad.
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Date: 2/8/2016 12:31:00 PM
Hi Eileen, I'm glad you liked it. It's seeing you I don't be on the soup as much as I used to. Thanks for stopping by-Alexis

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