Lost

My ship has sunk down I survived but dare not swim Save me from evil

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 5:02:00 AM

Very inventive thought, congrats on the win

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 10:04:00 PM

Congrats on your win!!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/20/2014 9:31:00 PM

Intense, such a strong poem, I enjoyed this one so much, Tread water, save or surrender, ship has sunk, will you sink under. Grats on your win! well done!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2014 7:06:00 PM

Congrats my friend..hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:10:00 PM

like a small tale in your haiku! Congrats for win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:33:00 AM

Anoucheka, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/26/2014 10:49:00 AM

S.O.S,wonderful write Anoucheka