Lost

I'm lost and I can't find my way I'm trapped by words I can not say Somewhere along this path I lost who I am inside And behind this smile is where I hide When I look in the mirror I don't like who I see I never seen that person before That isn't me! I'm an angry person inside and out I don't like who I am without a doubt I miss who I was before I don't want to feel like this anymore I've hurt people not knowing the cost Not knowing I would become Lost

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2012 7:12:00 AM

What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Tiffany. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

Tiffany Rowe
Date: 10/26/2012 10:36:00 AM

Awwww thanks carol you are too sweet :) I hope you have a wonderful weekend as well

Carl Fraser

Date: 10/25/2012 9:05:00 PM

Life has a way of taking our actions full circle until all we can do is really just sit down and take a hard look at ourselves. Nicely done Tiff, look forward to more.

Tiffany Rowe
Date: 10/26/2012 10:40:00 AM

Yeah I agree lately my life hasn't been that great thats why I wrote this poem. I literally took a hard look at myself and realized I don't like who I've become over the years. So thats when "Lost" came along just couldnt shake the feeling of how I felt so I decided to do what I do best write a poem of how i feel thanks so much for your comment it truly means a lot to me

Sha'Ntez Jefferson

Date: 10/25/2012 6:55:00 PM

wow this is a nice piece we all go to places at some point in our lives we regret in hindsight

Tiffany Rowe
Date: 10/25/2012 8:31:00 PM

Thanks so much I poured my heart out in this one it means so much to me that people can relate to my poetry :)

Jod!E Quintero

Date: 10/25/2012 6:42:00 PM

I feel your pain here...deep write. JodieQ

Tiffany Rowe
Date: 10/25/2012 8:36:00 PM

Thanks :) yeah it really makes me happy that people can relate to my poetry. It is so rewarding to me because I really spend a lot of time on my poetry. Its the only thing that gets me through the pain and sorrow I've endured in my life. So thank you so much for your comment it truly means alot