Lost

I spin and twirl fall and unfurl whirling round and round upside down thrown and tossed forever lost pulled and battered pushed and splattered caught in the squall the chaos of it all turned inside out bounced about completely unravelled emotionally frazzled broken and worn shredded and torn chucked on the ground never again found

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Jayne Eggins

Date: 8/8/2009 3:08:00 AM

Wurling spinning ... this was wonderful thanks for taking me on the journey wonderful write congrates on being featured this week .. Love Jayne x x x

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/6/2009 7:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem I enjoyed this! Laura :)

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/6/2009 12:53:00 PM

Congrats Kat on your featured write, "Lost." Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/3/2009 8:07:00 PM

Kat - Wow that about says it all home girl - way to break it down,rhyme and flow were outstanding to say the least - congrats on being featured I certainly see that as our blessing - God Bless you hon, MJ

Jared Pickett

Date: 8/3/2009 1:05:00 PM

Interesting rhyme scheme......Congrats on the feature.......:JP]

James Peranteau

Date: 8/3/2009 7:58:00 AM

Sorry for the typo ( Kat) ! james

James Peranteau

Date: 8/3/2009 7:51:00 AM

Kate,...this poem,..its a coincidence i'm sure,...but that Pilot they just discovered from ( 1991 ) burried in the dessert,..Micheal Scott a Navy air pilot,...I just can now picture his demise through your poem,..I'm sure that you did'nt write it this way,..but it really lit me for the go ahead !! Great poetry my friend,..and congrats on its feature !!!! james