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A distant society of lost souls and tathered clothes people finding their way in the dark with their eyes clothed how come im still here tring to find my way out when my oppertunity is lurking as a shadow about how come my tears only fall from the left side down only to hit the cold hard ground as my life comes to an end I pray that the lord accepts my in I pray his grace will keep me dear to make my hear clean and clear an if not then satan damn my soul arm me with arrows, bows, and harden clothes cause imma solder, the enemy, a warrior within with nothing to lose, but new life to begain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/2/2009 3:01:00 PM
lost souls well described in this poem,loniliness,cries andhard time,very nicely penned,sun will shine after the rain,that i believe----charma
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Date: 5/2/2009 8:08:00 AM
Hello Tevin... strong undertones to this poem; a good write... blessed are the damned I say. All the Best Co
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:09:00 AM
listen to the song Amazing Grace, I once was lost but now I am found, God bless from diane
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:07:00 AM
what a powerful and great poem, God accepts you his grace will pour upon you, he ehars and answers all our prayers. when our life ends its a begining of new life with God in heaven and I know you will be there for sure, God bless from diane
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