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im looking at everything and realized why i never tell a lot of nothing people always say im so nice people always say i should be treated right that it something i deserve whenever i begin to walk the curve but the thing is with me im almost never happy im not depressed im just obsessed with knowing things will go wrong and just not trying to sing that bad song but each day i realize there is more i want to say but i stop myself knowing that i am drifting away each day in stronger state of dismay its terrible itself how im losing more mental health my mind is in shambles from all the feeling and thoughts that i gambled and know it starting to catch and no longer can i look up because its getting heavier to hold in my mind now im sold to devil's hands himself all because i have kept too much to myself

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/22/2009 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Remember it's not over until the ... Make a list of happy things to do. Do them when those negative feelings begin. Or write write write... God bless you. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/21/2009 1:28:00 PM
Hi Eric, congratulations on your featured poem. Mine is also featured this week. Keep on posting. Ernilando
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Date: 4/21/2009 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations Eric on the featuring of "Lost." Vince
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Date: 4/21/2009 1:24:00 AM
You get the last say when it comes to playing to the devils hands, for it is never too late, to realise your mistakes and repent and come to know your Saviour. A little faith will bring you a whole lot of Love and the beauty of promises with it. I hope you come to know the peace I share. A great piece to muse on, congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/20/2009 9:09:00 PM
Eric, Congrats on having your poem featured!
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Date: 4/20/2009 4:03:00 PM
Congrats on an excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/20/2009 3:43:00 PM
God Bless You. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/19/2009 10:04:00 PM
Eric, nice work and congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:08:00 AM
Eric - Bro I have been in and out of prisons, marriages and just about anything else you can imagine - The Lord saved me while serving a shu term for stabbing another inmate - I had fell as low as a person can fall - Now my life is one of beauty, respect and love - Turn it over to the Lord and accept him and all his blessings - I am living proof it's never to late - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:42:00 PM
Eric welcome to the Soup. You sound pretty down on yourself and I know the feeling. But I have found a lot of ways to turn things around. Check out Leons poetry, he gives a lot of good advice. God Bless and like Leon said the devil is defeated when you give your life to Christ, Ron
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:37:00 AM
wow, i can relate to this poem, It's absolutly wonderfully amazing!:)
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Date: 4/7/2009 6:32:00 AM
Hi Eric welcome to poetry soup. Its never too late as a christian myself I want to let you know the devil is defeated my friend. Read my poems and see if they help you. God Bless. Leon
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