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Loss of Winning

losing controls my thinking mind while everyone sits, waiting for what i might find imagination makes it all high i would love that to be true and i let out a searing sigh my face turns shades of blue of all my wasted time i need to do some choosing but when reality is sour as a lime im tired of always losing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/5/2011 8:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Ethan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2011 7:10:00 PM
Good flow and rhyming..Enjoyed reading this eve.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/4/2011 7:10:00 PM
Sorry that I did not sign it..Sara

Book: Shattered Sighs