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Loss of Love

Too long have I been locked inside my mind; Into my ponderations, ever bleak. This great divide; I always seem to find A week a year and every day a week. I see you in my mind each day and night But ever as a shadow; slowly turns To smoke and then from smoke into the light; And light into the shadow slowly burns. It saddens me when I cannot recall That blissful sparkle; glimmers from your eyes. I lose myself; I stumble and I fall Beyond despair. But who shall hear my cries? No more; I must break free from in this cell And live a life so free with you as well.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/16/2012 8:15:00 PM
This was so wonderful to read. Thank you so much for sharing this with me today, Love :)
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Date: 2/13/2012 1:45:00 PM
Show don't tell. Try cutting words out you don't need.
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Date: 2/11/2012 7:12:00 AM
Well George,life can be a happy journey.Thank you for sharing this poem with me today. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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