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Loss of Feeling

Loss of feeling Numbness is not so calming Heart wrenching pain I swear to God the light is calling I close my eyes and I see it So, clear So, vivid. And all I know is that I am falling… Down, Down, Down, From my own body It sits there with its lifeless fake smile While me, I’m just diminishing down this pit Of black dust Filled with spit... Is this me? I have changed… Is this me? You say yes? Really, I’m not even in my own body...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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