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Losing You

The day I knew I lost you, my heart began to sink, I could never get my head straight, but to only sit and think. The good the bad and all the times of how u made me feel, when I was with u Debbie, I was as happy as could be. In life we always try to hard or never try at all, but being with you all I knew, is that I had it all. You know that you will always have my heart for you to hold, so never take for granted, the things that you've been told. Its never late to try again, and make our love be great, the way we wore, just once before and sitting talking late. Iv lost my life, but that u know, cause its you I'm talking of, iv also lost my heart, my soul, but most of all my love. Il never be to far away, for you to come and see, that all you need to do pumpkin, is close your eyes for me. I'm lost inside I cannot win but if I had you here, us together, you and me, it would all become so clear. I met my angel when I met you, your heart it is just gold, your smile and beauty was so rare, but the feelings are always there. I wish I was there, to hold you close, I would never let you go, to getting so close to you is all that I crave, and what we have been threw, I no we can save

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Date: 5/7/2016 11:12:00 AM
awesome poem, david...linda
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David Mcilwaine
Date: 5/7/2016 12:45:00 PM
Thank you ??
Date: 5/4/2016 2:39:00 PM
David,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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