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Losing You

You were but a fleeting moment to calm my insanity Bridging the gap of conciousness to outright calamity Behind eyes of sorrow False words of tomorrow From ruby red lips Twisted sounds Shaking Trembling the grounds Beneath me Lies and deceit Masked by vows of love Causing little doubt Within becomes without The air in my lungs Needed to shout To scream Shake me Awaken me From this nightmare This endless dream Of yesterdays visions Of closed eyes Blinded by my fears Of losing you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/4/2013 9:15:00 PM
Richard, love the win, congrats......... SKAT
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Date: 10/3/2013 8:37:00 AM
congrats on your win
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Date: 10/2/2013 8:22:00 AM
great write...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:45:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Richard
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:40:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Richard
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Date: 3/13/2013 5:35:00 PM
Hi Richard, . your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! losing someone close, can open a can of all the emotions above... Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:10:00 PM
You seem to be always there with an encouraging comment...thanks rick
Date: 2/23/2013 8:03:00 AM
Richard I like this a lot and the format works very well...David
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