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Losing you

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Below is the poem entitled Losing you which was written by poet richard ferry. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Losing you

You were but a fleeting moment to calm my insanity      Bridging the gap of conciousness to outright calamity      Behind eyes of sorrow      False words of tomorrow      From ruby red lips      Twisted sounds       Shaking      Trembling the grounds     Beneath me       Lies and deceit     Masked by vows of love      Causing little doubt      Within becomes without      The air in my lungs      Needed to shout      To scream      Shake me      Awaken me      From this nightmare      This endless dream      Of yesterdays visions      Of closed eyes     Blinded by my fears      Of losing you

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  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:15:00 PM
    Richard, love the win, congrats......... SKAT

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 8:37:00 AM
    congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 8:22:00 AM
    great write...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:45:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Richard

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:40:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Richard

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:35:00 PM
    Hi Richard, . your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! losing someone close, can open a can of all the emotions above... Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA

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    Date: 3/13/2013 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You seem to be always there with an encouraging comment...thanks rick
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Richard I like this a lot and the format works very well...David