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Losing Colour

Pink spreads and swells, turns black the ink you imprinted on paper. The writing will annoy you remind you. So you’ll erase it, or at least try to. But gods of colour are capricious, it’ll move, but refuse to go. You can be stubborn too. Neither will lose until I do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/31/2015 9:44:00 PM
deep first write
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Date: 9/29/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome guys! I'm really excited to read everyone's work and improve my own style. :)
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Date: 9/27/2015 1:23:00 PM
- Hey Nikita :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2015 6:46:00 PM
Hi Nikita, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/18/2015 10:58:00 AM
Hi Nikita, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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