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Losing

Under Pressure Under stress. Lost in thought Without finesse. Losing self Losing mind. Losing life Losing time. Darkness strikes Upon my fate. Twisted lies That I ate. Evil hatred That I veil. Hiding pain But it fails. Emtpy, hated; Hollow heart. All my life Falls apart. Crumbles down In a quake. Losing sight Gaining hate. For who am I To suffer so. At this point I feel so low. Bring me up From this dream. Haunted nightmare As it seems. Break me of Hated habit. Lonely life That I fathom. I go on As I may. Depression felt 'Til this day... ©2009 ~FR34K0N4L345H33

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Date: 10/15/2009 9:50:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rachel. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2009 7:36:00 AM
I love ryming poems, they are my favorite, and I love dark stuff, so the combination was great. I have a question was this published I see a copyright. Did you copyright all your work? Was it expensive?
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