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Liquid sun, steaming rain outcasted huricane, shocking pain sunny microwave, wet freak electric flood, mild phsique raining volts, empty meter strange hail, solar heater i have good days and bad days just like you on your scale it probably bad to worse ive never been popular never known what to do its like a weather report for Belfast you know the clouds in the sky theres either many or few Liquid sun, steaming rain outcasted huricane, shocking pain sunny microwave, wet freak electric flood, mild phsique raining volts, empty meter strange hail, solar heater Or mybe its like a electric meter mines always near or empty ive never had a girlfriend long enough to be a cheater thou i wouldnt do that type of thing i feel undeserving, i stay cold, dont deserve a heater Liquid sun, steaming rain outcasted huricane, shocking pain sunny microwave, wet freak electric flood, mild phsique raining volts, empty meter strange hail, solar heater

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Date: 12/20/2009 8:58:00 AM
Interesting setup for your acrostic poem... reads well between the lines too... just so u will know.. we all have those good days and bad .. some months are worse than others.. but in the end.. "its all good" so keep that thought in mind... enjoy your Sunday... football mania possess me during the season.. I can't think of anything else.. even poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S. SOUP MAIL REPLY
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