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Loser

Caught up in a world of dreams and false hope looking for a cure that can't be found fighting with a demon that's not even there a life with no future struggles to find its way as the real world caves in the dreams fade away a life with no purpose sees no reason to go on yet it lives any way and tries to move on a world with out this life would not change one bit the feeling of being useless will not let it be a soul lost can not be free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/1/2010 11:36:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Justin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2010 6:47:00 PM
A wonderful write. I like it
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Date: 4/30/2010 4:34:00 PM
impressive i love your loser poem. my kinda write and read,..p.d.
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