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Lose Myself

I am falling into oblivion
Into that deep dark hole

I try to crawl under a rock
Just like a nasty mole

I try climbing up the ladder
But, the further I go down

I cover up with my sheets
However, the sun just shines through

I try to lose myself
I just cannot seem to make a move

The air outside is so thick
So, I run back inside

I do not want to participate
I just want to hide

No pill to alleviate
Or, I would be the one to try

I will just have to wait it out
And hope I make it back to the other side..

Holly P. Moore
September 2012

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  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Holly this one says you are giving up, I read on a comment somewhere you had lost your son, keep going for his sake, try writing in one of the forms here and see if it makes you write and see things in a different way! good luck...I like your work...David

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:15:00 AM
    These "holes" are not that easy to get up by the yourself Holly. Much emotion in this poem, well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)