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Lose Control

I sometimes lose control of everything I do or want to do and when I lose control I can't help myself I get excited and I will keep going and won't stop I lose control when I get excited nobody can stop me I am just out of it in another world.

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Date: 2/1/2012 6:10:00 AM
Dear Mindy, This "in another world" - is that your own one, per the previous poem I commented on ? This poem is a pretty powerful ststement. Love Alan
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