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Loose Lips

You didn't mean to say it But it's out there now And things will never be the same The sleeping dog Aroused from its slumber, Loose lips Have sunk your ship

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Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 3/5/2009 7:19:00 PM

I once told my good friend my other good friend was planning on breaking up with her. God to be young and stupid again. I can't hold people to their own dark thoughts. Everyone has them just no one wants to say what they are. Whatever, it'll come out sooner or later. I think your subject said something darker like ' i love you' hoping you'd say it back. that one definitely redesigns the emotional landscape.

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/19/2009 5:52:00 AM

Nice poem Kevin and great ending. People with Loose Lips are my pet peeve...Raul

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/19/2009 4:10:00 AM

I have sunk a few ship in my time with my tongue..LOL..good message, good work.