Loony

Fling frolic fierce Ply pretty pierce Trade thoughtful tears Fashion feeds fame Troubles try tame Niche naughty name Leave laughter loud Pry petty proud Aim art aloud Sense surreal sights Lines linger light Freeze-frame free flight Fear flavours fall Grime gifting gall Boom blazing ball Curves crowding curls Use urge unfurls Soothe sensuous swirls Take treasured thought Nurture nice naught Ponder prime plot Make movement mime Treat tender times Rest rowdy rhymes Live laughter's lease Pain plunders peace Etch encores ease Leon Enriquez 15 December 2014 Singapore

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/15/2014 6:25:00 PM

Good Alliteration, Leon, Blessings

Leon Enriquez
Date: 12/15/2014 6:42:00 PM

Dear Eve: Thank you. Leon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2014 6:08:00 PM

Nice, Leon. Is it a particular form going by syllable count?

Leon Enriquez
Date: 12/15/2014 6:49:00 PM

Dear Andrea: Thank you. I use syllable count to moderate the voice movement, and also to stick to a certain pattern. It is a very useful brevity tool. Hope this helps, Andrea. All the best then, Leon.