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Looks Like Rain

I collect words in buckets, overflowing phrases and saturated sentences fall from imaginary skies Puddles of pristine prose fill in the counted cracks of this rhyme splashed sidewalk of verse Stormed stanzas and drizzled descriptions turn tears to chocolate kisses, frowns into April showers Pouring on a page, once dry, now drenched in rainbow arched metaphors on this candy cloud coated day It is raining poetry and I could not be happier I believe I will use these words to write something for you

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Date: 11/9/2016 11:31:00 AM
That's so YOU in a dark chocolate kiss! :) Let it reign poetry indeed...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/9/2016 12:57:00 PM
Thanks again Paloma, that sure sounds like a sweet treat to me. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Date: 11/8/2016 1:17:00 PM
Write for us ..or for her..or for him..or whoever..but yes do write..Candy clouds and chocolate kisses..indeed bring comfort to anyone in tears..especially for chocholics..Yummy...Its raining poetry. Indeed...and I love it when.it does..I just wish I had more time to read more soupers..who writes beautifully just like you.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2016 1:41:00 PM
Thanks again my sweet friend. Yep, I think chocoholics would have fun with this one. I'm more of a vanilla guy but would never turn down chocolate if it was offered. :) I truly appreciate the time you make to stop by and read my words, I always smile when you do.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/8/2016 1:17:00 PM
Soupers who write I meant oops sorry : )
Date: 11/8/2016 9:00:00 AM
"Stormed stanzas, turn frowns into April ahowers" delightful, Chris!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2016 3:06:00 PM
:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2016 3:06:00 PM
:)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim. I appreciate your kindness and I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/8/2016 8:47:00 AM
Love it Chris! - Tears to chocolate kisses, frowns to April showers. A magical poem. Going into my favorites :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2016 8:58:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend for the kind words and the fave. :)
Date: 11/8/2016 8:42:00 AM
rainbow arched metaphors on this candy cloud coated day...great line Chris...my skies are grey maybe it will rain poetry when I get back from the polls
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Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2016 8:44:00 AM
Raining here too but I voted a few weeks ago. :) Thanks so much Tim.

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