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Looking Out Tonight

And the clouds roll in Deep and dark as sin And Thor his anvil smashed The feared lightning flashed Rolling around the hills The liquid content spills The rain came in reams Saturating, filling streams Silver forks they dart and dance Flashing lights the hills enhance Thor is random with his throws As all around soaks and grows From the window, sit and gaze At mother nature as she plays At times soft, then shows her might In thought am safe this stormy night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/23/2010 6:45:00 AM
Loved it!
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Date: 2/22/2010 4:58:00 PM
We are expecting that severe downpour of rain tomorrow.. and also Thor the god of thunder.. visual and vivid Daniel.. and I do luv rain.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/21/2010 3:14:00 AM
The last line is soothing. Keep the expressive and creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2010 1:37:00 AM
Im looking out..to be somewhere safe,,in this very stormy night..beautiful Daniel,your words give the reader comfort and hope even in the worst of storms..Charma
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