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Looking For Spring

We too have waited for the spring, with great anticipation. Looking for each growing thing with eager expectation, and without trepidation. Our normal spring so filled with glory, With fields of luscious green, an outdoor conservatory in no other season seen. Rains have washed it bright and clean. I love the days of springtime when butterflies take wing, The vines with early flowers climb and songbirds stop to sing. But all is changed this spring. In our adjacent county a mile and half wide slide took homes and lives as bounty. So many good folks died. And many more have cried. It was early in the morning, two hundred folks in bed, the slide came without a warning. They're buried and they're dead. The mountain has been fed. Written 3/25/ 14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/8/2014 7:42:00 AM
Beautiful WIn Joyce, xox~ SKAT
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Date: 6/5/2014 4:58:00 PM
Great work reminding us about the sad tradegy..It was a unique and timely topic about which to write a winning work..Congrats.Sara
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Date: 6/2/2014 1:50:00 PM
polarity at its best, joyce.. congrats on your fine win and huggs
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Date: 5/31/2014 1:15:00 PM
THAt was a very good way to write about that tragic event, because it contrasts so starkly with the beauty of the season all around it. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/31/2014 1:21:00 PM
They are slowly coming back. They just found the last two bodies this week. They have built a road enough to get between the two towns of Arlington and Darrington withoutt having to take a long detour. The human spirit is indomitable. Joyce
Date: 5/31/2014 4:02:00 AM
Joy and sorrow written with the unique style you always share Joyce. I am honored to share #4 with such a great poet as yourself. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/31/2014 1:58:00 AM
Lovely poem on the Spring. Congrats on the win, Joyce
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Date: 5/30/2014 11:51:00 PM
congrats on your win Joyce, a sadder take on my contest
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Date: 5/30/2014 7:32:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/30/2014 4:55:00 PM
Joyce, quite a story you have told very poetically. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 5/30/2014 4:08:00 PM
Dear Joyce, I remember this poem so well. What happened in your state spread sadness throughout the rest of the country. A very deserved win, dear. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2014 3:13:00 PM
oh, powerful and thought provoking - love it
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Date: 3/29/2014 8:16:00 PM
Dear poet, many souls of late, have met their match. My prayers are strong with salt. A touching write Joyce ! Have a blessed weekend my dear soft poet....much love, james
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Date: 3/28/2014 1:50:00 PM
Dear Joyce, I am so glad you are not among those who succumbed to the avalanche. The first few verses painted a lovely image of spring, but the ending made me weep for all who were lost. Bless you for sharing this touching poem. Love you! Carolyn
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Date: 3/26/2014 3:34:00 PM
Spring can be so beautiful but just as easily be deadly. I remember all the floods a couple years back in the northeast that took the lives of many. Excellent write Joyce...Hugs Tim
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Date: 3/26/2014 2:04:00 PM
What a horror this event...A great poem ..BG
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Date: 3/26/2014 12:14:00 AM
wow, what a powerful poem, Joyce . Starts out so sweet and then gets so dark. I love this kind of poem!!
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