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Looking Deeply Into Your Heavenly Eyes

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Author's Notes: This romantic Couplet, entitled: "Looking Deeply into Your Heavenly Eyes," is a piece I wrote to reflect the love a man has for the special woman in his life in both an "earth-bound mortal sense" and in a "spiritual sense" as well. This is a very emotive poem which signifies a truly deep bond of love and feeling between this man and woman that is there forever!! I hope you will find this poem of interest!! (Gary Bateman, January 16, 2015) (Unrhymed Couplet)

Categories: allegory, beauty, emotions, feelings, love, romance, and spiritual.

Looking Deeply into Your Heavenly Eyes It’s such a beautiful Cosmos I see in your eyes My Love, When I’m looking so deeply into your Heavenly Eyes. I sense love, harmony and such passionate feeling, As I ponder the warm images I see and feel so My Love. As you look deeply into my eyes too My Love, I hope you sense my desire, passion, and love too. What more could anyone ask for in this life My Love— For without Love any celestial metaphor is truly meaningless. And so, sometimes late at night as I dream so deeply of you My Love, I meld as one with the sight I see so deeply in your Heavenly Eyes! And I want you to know that I shall be with you forever My Love, And for the rest of my life and beyond—my heart is forever yours! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (January 16, 2015) (Unrhymed Couplet)

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2015 3:24:00 PM

"without Love any celestial metaphor is truly meaningless"; so very true. Another beautiful and passionate read.

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/20/2015 3:37:00 PM

I'm glad you liked this romantic write. I enjoyed thinking about and penning this particular Couplet. Love is important, for it does bring positive meaning to our lives!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2015 6:27:00 AM

- Your heart speaks volumes here in your really beautiful lines Gary - (7 ++++ :) - There is only one true love .... (but, many different versions) - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/18/2015 9:03:00 AM

Hello Anne-Lise, Thanks again for your visit and most kind words in addition to the Super Plus Seven Rating!! I was sure you would be interested in this particular write as well. You are certainly right about "true love" and the "many different versions." Best Sunday Wishes . . . Always, Gary

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/17/2015 12:49:00 PM

I felt your heart through your words and it felt good. Emile.

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/17/2015 3:13:00 PM

Hello Emile My Friend!! Thanks for taking a read of my couplet here and I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it. Best Always, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/17/2015 5:19:00 AM

Hello again Gary! Very beautiful pen! A very passionate and tender romantic piece you've written here my dearest friend Gary. Your pen is truly golden! I enjoyed this one immensely! So moved by the pledge of eternal love.To love forever thats a most precious promise, ever to make in this world to someone when we love them, that's true love to me to love your partner, sweetheart no matter what and stay forever with that person till the end and beyond. Well, I really like your poem a lot! Sure Ingrid is a very lucky gal to have a sweet hubby and great poet like yourself writing her sometimes such a beautiful love poems. So happy for her, please give her my love. Thank you! A very solid 7 +++++ from me! Wishing you all the best as always! Have a wonderful weekend! :) Love and hugs! oxxoxxox D. ^O^

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/17/2015 3:11:00 PM

Hello "D"!!! Thanks again -- as always for the most wonderful comments and review of my poetry as well as the most super rating. You are so very kind!! I have shown Ingrid a number of your poems in the past and she's certainly a fan of your poetry too!! I will certainly pass on your Greetings to her as well!! She's working with me now on doing some illustrations for my upcoming book of selected poetry. Ingrid actually gives me some great ideas each week for possible poetic themes. Best Always to You "D" and a Giant Hug!! Gary XOXOXO

Tim Smith

Date: 1/16/2015 9:06:00 PM

So romantic...you are blessed my friend

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/17/2015 3:02:00 PM

Tim My Dear Friend, Thanks for your read and wonderful comment here. Glad you enjoyed this write. Best Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/16/2015 5:57:00 PM

love how you began this piece beautiful cosmos gary your pen just flowed golden in this pen top shelf pal

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/17/2015 2:54:00 PM

I was just following the wonderful example Liam that you set for all of us with all of your wonderful poetic writes as one of the "Resident Love Gods" at Poetry Soup. I'm pleased that like this piece Mate!! Best Always -- and time now for some "Irish" -- at least a couple of glasses or so!! Best!! Gary

Paul Callus

Date: 1/16/2015 5:03:00 PM

Here I can feel love in abundance. You two must be an ideal couple...a match made in heaven. Very romantic. Well done Gary. // paul

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/16/2015 5:15:00 PM

Hi Paul!! Thanks so much for your read and your very kind words!! I guess you figured out who the man and woman is in this poem. The object of all of my love poetry, of course, is my wife Ingrid. (She reads everything I write and is working on graphic illustrations for my future book!! And so, she's involved in the process for sure!!) Thanks again -- and I'll be touch!! Best!! Gary