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Looking Back

Looking back at my own life standing here today, see many moments of elation, and sadness, my childhood, caring parents, and with friends at play, innocence, intrigue, romance, of youthful madness, things I may wish to erase, retain or forget, but never shall I change the day, you and I met! Honourable Mention Written 14/01/2022 Line Gauthier sponsored bite size poetry #32 12 syllables each line. 6 lines!

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Date: 11/12/2022 1:20:00 PM
So sweet, Krish ~
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Date: 1/21/2022 9:46:00 AM
A lovely, nostalgic write, Krish! Congrats on your HM! Blessings, Kim M
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/21/2022 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Kim! Pleased you like it!:)
Date: 1/20/2022 11:01:00 PM
Great poem. The last line is very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/20/2022 11:56:00 PM
Thanks Christuraj!:)
Date: 1/20/2022 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. Your "looking back" is a wonderful write. What a story in just 6 lines. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/20/2022 12:02:00 PM
Paula, thanks so much for your kind words of support! So glad this was liked by Line!

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