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Looking At An Angel

The other night I saw an angel; She seemed to follow me everywhere. I tried to run but couldn’t, All that I could do was stare. The angel looked back at me, Not once did she turn away. I felt as though I were in a daze; I knew not what to say. My hands were trembling, my knees felt weak; She stood there smiling, as she slowly began to speak. She told me she had been here once before; She said that she knew me. I looked at her and wondered, “Who could this angel be?” She said to search deep and the answer would be found inside my heart; She told me we were once together and never dreamed we’d have to part. My confusion soon vanished, For this was an angel like no other. She was no stranger. . . This angel was once my mother.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/12/2016 10:56:00 PM
Tara, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:14:00 PM
- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us Tara :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:24:00 AM
Touching write, Tara, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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