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Looked Like a Loser

Looked Like a Loser He looked like a loser who often lied And even every drug he had tried; If he only had made God his goal To enter his life and save his soul. Around and around he had wandered He heard lightening after it thundered. Message to him God was sending; When you see a rainbow I am the ending. Also of all life, I am the beginning While your hair is gray and now thinning; Such a shame you never heard the Lord And see in life all He always adored. But now you have gone a different way And there is nothing left to say; Outside its so dreary and now does rain; While you're in asylum for the insane. Jim Horn jthorn5656@atmc.net

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/7/2013 8:33:00 PM
Very nice poem.
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