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Look Memaw! I went outside when my grandson called me. Down the wheelchair ramp I walked while looking. I glanced all around, left and right, searching. Then, I heard it, his wee small voice saying, “Look, Memaw, I am up here in the tree!” To my surprise, I had to look way up. Not ten feet, not twenty feet, thirty feet – Yes, tiny as he is, he climbed that high. Afraid to show alarm, that he might fall. I laughed and said, “What are you, my primate?” “What’s a primate?” he asked curiously. “A monkey, a primate is a monkey.” After I responded, he replied, “No.” With great pride, adding, “I am a tree frog.” © February 29, 2012 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen © February 29, 2012 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Narratives Free Poetry Sponsor Catie Lindsey

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Date: 3/12/2012 12:12:00 PM
Excellent one..Enjoyed the humor..Got a chuckle..Did he have a problem getting down?..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/12/2012 6:22:00 PM
No trouble getting up or down...just like a tree frog!
Date: 3/12/2012 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Narratives" contest Dane Ann. Love,Carol
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/12/2012 6:23:00 PM
Thank you, Carol, for reading and supporting my efforts with your comments. Love, Dane Ann
Date: 3/11/2012 6:28:00 PM
Beautiful and precise,Dane.Nice entry and Congratulations on your win...
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/11/2012 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Olusegun. (And congratulations again with your recent haiku publication success.) I am happy for you.
Date: 3/11/2012 5:09:00 PM
How cute is this, such a happy entry in this difficult challenge! You always make me smile with your poems. Once again, so enjoyable! Congratulations, Dane Ann!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/11/2012 6:41:00 PM
I am so glad that you enjoyed my little story. Thank you for your very sweet comment and your congratulations. Big Smiles to you!
Date: 3/11/2012 3:44:00 PM
Dane Ann congrats on your win, a cool grandson you have there..David
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/11/2012 5:00:00 PM
Big Smiles! Grandchildren are wonderful!
Date: 2/29/2012 1:08:00 PM
Oh Wow what a scare Dane Ann. Wishing you the best in Catie's contest. Love, Carol
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/11/2012 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Carol, for your continued support and encouragement. Lovingly, Dane Ann

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