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If you took a tender tear...and held it oh so near What would you see inside? A meal less man with a reaching hand With haunting hurts stretching oh so wide If you held a broken heart...and tore it all apart What would you see inside? A wounded woman with venomous vermin With all the abuse she will nest and hide If you saw a fragile frown...and smashed it to the ground What would you see inside? A cheated child within the wild From cribs to jail cells with hands now tied If I hand a magic wand...quickly I would respond To heal the world with just a swirl All within one stride... If I captured your stellar soul...and had a peek thru heavens hole What would I see inside? July.16.2016 If I could change the world - Poetry Contest By Becca Teagan

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/31/2016 11:46:00 PM

Congrats on this wonderful thought, I do wish you get that magic wand! Well penned.:D Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 10:57:00 PM

:D :D

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/1/2016 12:39:00 PM

Thank you Sunita...I think they are selling them at the dollar store lol...god bless...WW

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/1/2016 12:38:00 PM

Thank you Sunita...I think they are selling them at the thirt store lol...god bless...WW

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/31/2016 9:42:00 PM

I love the thought of having a magic wand and we could heal the world with just a swirl! :) I really love the poetic quality of this poem... you did a wonderful job. Everyone got a first place win as this was a challenge more than a contest. Thank you for your participation! Hugs

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/1/2016 12:35:00 PM

Thank you Becca for having me...it was an honor to be in your challenge of the mind and pen lol...god bless...WW