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Look Farther

They always tell me "stop seeing what isn't there" I say, look harder... past the appearance... through to the bare They look at me confused, stuck like a deer in a glare Seemingly refusing to adjust their stare Still dumbfounded they ask "where?" I say, past the acrylic nails, color contacts, and extensions of hair Past the skimpy dressed body shaped like a pear Past the facade of "I don't care" Into the soul that's experienced a couple of tears Into a life that's had to walk through the devil's lair Without judgement, to see a human being, to you I dare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/3/2012 9:06:00 AM
Wow...this is an excellent write...love it..hope to see you soon my dear!!!
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Date: 6/1/2012 7:59:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Gianna. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2012 7:52:00 PM
Nice. I really like it
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Date: 5/31/2012 4:41:00 PM
very nice Gianna
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