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I recall long ago seeing a picture of a soldier holding a child, A small child of war and that image still breaks my heart; Why can the wars around the world just stop and peace come, And in every part of this world peaceful discussions prevail. Oh, if all humans could just live in harmony and stop the wars, This is what the world needs for you and me and everyone; Peace is beautiful but it cannot be forced, it must be a choice, The soldiers of war come home broken people unable to forget. In my country of Canada our new Prime Minister has promised, He will bring twenty-five thousand refugees in by year end; Some say that is impossible but I pray that it does come true, We cannot save all the victims of war but each one is a miracle. I am just a girl with no power to change anything in reality, But I have a voice and I say, make peace not war for the world. _____________________________ October 25, 2015 Quatorzain For the contest, Promote Peace Not War, sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Date: 11/1/2015 3:42:00 PM
Lovely poem, Broken Wings, that speaks of our constant hope for peace and harmony, and looking beyond ourselves to help make it happen. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/2/2015 5:42:00 PM
Sandra, thank you for your forever support ~
Date: 10/31/2015 12:18:00 AM
Lovely win. SKAT
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Date: 10/31/2015 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Skat ~
Date: 10/30/2015 9:27:00 AM
Hey BW, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful winning poem! An insightful and thought provoking treatise on the mindset of war and what the world could be like without it. Excellent writing my friend. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 10/30/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Neva for the nice comment and congrats, appreciated ~
Date: 10/28/2015 1:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Broken Wings!
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Date: 10/28/2015 8:20:00 AM
Grace, thanks for the congrats, appreciated ~
Date: 10/27/2015 8:57:00 PM
Congrats Broken, nicely done :)
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Date: 10/28/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Edward ~
Date: 10/27/2015 7:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend. Your poem is superb and so evident of your talent...
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Date: 10/27/2015 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Robert for the nice comment and congrats !
Date: 10/26/2015 7:17:00 AM
Broken Wings.. this is a nicely composed piece on the effects of war and the elusive promise of world peace.. it starts with offering hope and no act is too small.. you become a positive influencer when you breathe the words of positive assertion,, //hugs & peace
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Date: 10/26/2015 7:44:00 AM
Lewis, thank you so much for the wonderful comment ~
Date: 10/26/2015 12:01:00 AM
Very nice thanks for sharing
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Date: 10/26/2015 7:45:00 AM
And thank you Street for visiting ~
Date: 10/25/2015 3:33:00 PM
We all wish for peace, with you... War is a terrible thing.
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem, Myles, hopefully we can give some peace and safety in Canada ~
Date: 10/25/2015 1:15:00 PM
Very nice write. Words of wisdom.
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thank you James
Date: 10/25/2015 12:53:00 PM
I am sure none of the soldiers forget the things they have experienced - such a powerful poem - and you are doing something by using your poetic voice - these things can make a difference:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:43:00 PM
Jan, there are so many heartbreaking images of war but that one always really bothered me and I feel such sadness not just for the child but for the soldier too ~
Date: 10/25/2015 12:39:00 PM
The sadness in that soldiers face is haunting, I doubt he ever forgot that child ~
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