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Look at me

Look at ME!
I hold your gaze for untold amounts of time,
When others try to talk with you,
I’m so important,
That sometimes you won’t even look away from me,
When you see me, I am a window into the world,
A message from afar, limitless information,
I mesmerize you with my brightness and color,
Other things arent as important to you,
Other things need your affection,
But this bond we have is so strong, I have your attention most the time,
The world goes on around you but you hardly even notice,
Because to notice would reveal an absence 
An absence of romance, adventure and life,
I feel so special, if only I could feel,
I can tell you love me, but I can not love you back, for
I am, your smart phone, cell phone, I pad and computer,
look at me, look at me, look at me.

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  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Suave xxx

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 7:35:00 PM
    Well at least I limit my relationships to this tablet...and a throw away phone! Awesome twist...loved it....really surprise ending....

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 7:59:00 PM
    HAHAHAHAHAHA. YES!! Oh my gosh, could this be anymore hilarious and true?! As I'm sitting behind my laptop... ;) Teehee. I love it, we're a generation that has stronger relationships to technology than we do to actual human beings haha. Well done! :)