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Look At Me

i curl your long dark hair in my fingers at your neck as I pull you down I wait to feel the rough end of day beard on my face your eyes close a little then open to watch me look at me, I whisper dont stop looking at me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/10/2009 7:28:00 PM
I love the ending of this poem so much... Veronica, your style is amazing. Great job.
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Date: 8/26/2009 5:18:00 AM
I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today Veronica. I thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2009 5:44:00 PM
deeply powerful emotion concentrated in the simplicity of form magnified in the anticipated momentof every word screems yes line2 i feel emphises better on hair -- hair long dark in my fingers radiates outward from the central theme twith enhancement...........o
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Date: 8/25/2009 3:37:00 PM
you go, sounds sensual
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