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There is new life everyway in the skies, trees and both in the earth and under it Lambs skipping chasing each other then running to their mothers to suckle Eggs cracking open in the nest chicks fighting their way out of shell mum tidy's up and beaks ever ready for food brought by dad as mum keeps them warm Mammals barrel deep inside the warm earth born blind and often hairless. Insects hide under bark, tunnel into holes while skin split and new forms appear Eggs cracking wide open lambs frolic skipping at play split skin reveal moths

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Date: 3/22/2024 5:32:00 AM
Dear shadow, this is beautiful and soulfully divine, i love the way youv delivered your haibun, reminder that is powerful on how theres so much to appreciate and be grateful for, if we take a minute to look around, much needed dear, i loved this. Hope you are doing well. Im sending you light always! And faving this
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Date: 3/22/2024 8:08:00 AM
ty so much Ink your comments fill my heart and inspire me hugs Shaodw
Date: 3/19/2024 4:43:00 PM
Your Haibun was a powerful statement of the beauty of renewal that's all around us. I appreciate the gentle reminder in your beautiful words. I especially liked the Haiku at the end. Well done...wishing you continued health and healing, hugs, Sara
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Date: 3/19/2024 4:51:00 PM
ty sara you are a sweet heart bless you hugs Shadow
Date: 3/19/2024 8:26:00 AM
Dear Shadow, I really loved how your imagery captures the beauty and vitality of nature's constant renewal. The scenes of lambs frolicking, eggs cracking open, and mammals burrowing underground evoke a sense of wonder and awe. Your words reflect on pausing and appreciating the miracles unfolding around us, from the tiniest insects to the grandeur of the skies. I like the interconnectedness of all living things and the enduring resilience of life itself. Excellent! Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/19/2024 8:45:00 AM
ty Daniel for such high praise it warmed my heart ot read it hugs Shadow
Date: 3/19/2024 2:49:00 AM
simply beautiful poetry and a joy to read! (as always even if I am not here as much)
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Date: 3/19/2024 5:41:00 AM
hello Arthur so nice to see you and wow such a great comment hugs Shadow

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