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Longing Dreams

Longing dreams as our eyes finally meet A quaint introduction in this modern day sweet To a park we stroll under winters darkening sky Chatting and laughing in accommodating apply The heavens declare their time of the year rains Whilst two amble joyfully absorbing natures champagne A few drinks they enjoy blending into their night Confirmed by a kiss declares their meet right Hand in hand, now closer than before Their longing dreams in their minds they explored With soft music playing and an oaky Lindemann's poured Two hearts beating over the music they soar Glasses laid down her hand he requests As they dance to many songs, their sensing of zest Again their eyes meet as a slow love song plays Their previously explored minds start to show their displays http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-12.php

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Date: 10/18/2014 11:48:00 PM
weeeeeeeee.. :D!!! this so romantic!!! always february mr . JAmes.. :)
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James Fraser
Date: 10/20/2014 3:38:00 PM
A roaming romantic poem purely written off the cuff. I was probably listening to 'Rock Ballads' at the time - James
Date: 8/6/2010 2:06:00 AM
awesome love poem here. love it. Harry
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:25:00 PM
Very romantic write.. Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 8/5/2010 12:31:00 PM
Enjoyed this romantic write from you James.. Visually perfect my friend.. tc Wilma Ps: Thank you for the wishes for the contest. I'm sure your massage piece will do well :)
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:47:00 AM
May I have the next dance, James? I love the romantic atmosphere you created here! You are among the Soup's finest in writing about romance! Love, Carolyn
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