Longing

Here I am Vulnerable and weak, Hiding behind The approval I seek. Unimportant, Not even a priority I feel so much Yet nothing at all.

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Steven Henderson

Date: 11/1/2016 6:30:00 AM

I pray now you hear the call. Peace be unto you with many blessings.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2016 3:49:00 PM

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Heidi Sands

Date: 10/22/2016 9:16:00 AM

I wasn't going to enter the clapping poem, but I did if you are interested to read it.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/22/2016 9:10:00 AM

Wow, I can feel the feelings in this write. Good job. It reminds me of a poem I am thinking of putting in here. Maybe I will now. It is called clapping... a bit about approval you may like or identify with.