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Longing

Modern... longing overwhelming, relentless remembering, reliving, yearning I am lost and alone heartache Traditional... longing to be with you in a tent or castle to hear your voice and see your face heartache For Dr. Rams contest.

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/6/2015 12:11:00 AM

I love both, Barbara...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:17:00 PM

Barbara, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/2/2015 2:50:00 PM

Congratulations, Barbara, for your win for this lovely longing Cinquain in both forms! I say both forms deliver the emotional impact feelings of longing well. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 2:08:00 PM

I am a fan of the traditional. Love both of yours and it's good to see someone entered a traditional one and won. congrats.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 11:41:00 AM

So beautifully penned Barbara many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 8:40:00 AM

A 7 rating for this beautiful 'double' poem on longing and heartache, Barbara! Well done and congrats on your win. All the best for 2015. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 3:14:00 AM

Congrats on the win Barbara,I love it...huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 9:48:00 PM

Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Barbara

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/20/2014 2:39:00 AM

Very beautiful pen in all its sadness Barbara! I can feel your pain. Hope all works for you in the end if not fictional. Wish you happiness your dreams come true. A 7 for you! It was a pleasure to read your verses in this very unique form dear friend. I wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a very nice weekend! G.L. in the contest with Dr. Ram! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/19/2014 11:06:00 PM

Awesome form my friend, I love this! You have written a dynamic and wondrous write here! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a superior piece, you will surely get 1st with this powerful poem! Great Work!!