Longing

Longing Waiting, hoping Heart slowly dying Memories re-fuelling forgotten dreams Yearning Longing Wistfully awaiting Dreams to stir Prayers to be answered Caring Penned 18 December 2014

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Natia Blaine

Date: 1/26/2015 6:37:00 AM

very beautiful !! xoxoxo

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/6/2015 12:29:00 AM

Lovely, Seren...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/10/2015 8:13:00 AM

Thank you Rhonda ....Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:15:00 PM

Seren, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/3/2015 3:55:00 PM

Thank you Linda .....Seren

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/2/2015 2:36:00 PM

Congratulations, Seren, for your win with your beautiful poem about longing. Best wishes for the new year. Sandra

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/3/2015 3:54:00 PM

Thank you Sandra for your congratulations....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 2:04:00 PM

beautiful, seren. congrats for your win in this new year!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 10:07:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, ....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 11:36:00 AM

such a beautiful write Seren many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 12:30:00 PM

Hugs Jan thank you so much .....Seren

Paul Callus

Date: 1/2/2015 8:23:00 AM

Such a lovely cinquain, Seren! #7 You describe longing perfectly. Congratulations on your podium finish. I wish you all the best for 2015. // paul

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 12:31:00 PM

Hi Paul, thank you for your congrats, happy new year to you and yours .....Seren

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 3:07:00 AM

It is another winning year, congrats Seren ...huggs

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 5:15:00 AM

thank you so much for stopping by...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 9:35:00 PM

Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 5:13:00 AM

Thanks Dr Ram for placing my poem ....Seren

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/27/2014 2:00:00 PM

This one now breaks my heart. I hope this wins number one. A Fav.

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/27/2014 6:04:00 PM

Maurice thanks so much the fav and comments .. .Seren

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/22/2014 10:06:00 PM

I do believe Etienne discovered a star, so to speak, this is one of the best poems I have read! An A7 in my books.

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 3:46:00 PM

thanks my friend ...Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/24/2014 2:04:00 PM

I often just bookmark my favorite ones! I faved this one! there! Merry Christmas

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/24/2014 5:27:00 AM

thank you for your lovely comment, I think its strange so many write glowing reports yet it hasn't been fav once, ahh well that's life...Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/22/2014 7:44:00 PM

I can see why you have received such glowing comments for this one. Bravo!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/22/2014 10:07:00 PM

I agree 100% Richard

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/22/2014 8:04:00 PM

Thank you Richard, the amount of people that have stopped to read it shocks me somewhat.....Seren

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/18/2014 4:26:00 PM

Gorgeous Seren!

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2014 4:30:00 PM

Hi Maurice, thanks for the comment ...Seren

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 12/18/2014 1:01:00 PM

This is a very beautiful poem, tres fantastique!!!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2014 4:24:00 PM

thank you...Seren