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Longing

You turn around and expect to see me there. But no longer do I belong to you. I'm free now to see the world. I'm happy to be free, but I still find you there waiting on me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/19/2014 2:01:00 PM
Thanks for the positive feedback.
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Wormie Magesword
Date: 2/19/2014 2:04:00 PM
Also check out some of my other poems to please.
Date: 1/29/2014 3:19:00 PM
Here's hoping he merely waits and doesn't turn into a stalker.
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Jerry Bolton
Date: 1/29/2014 3:19:00 PM
I meant she instead of he, sorry.
Date: 1/29/2014 9:56:00 AM
former love is like a shadow of one's past. nice work. Robert
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