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Thou art the whisper of mine heart
                                   A longing that cannot be answered

for Brian Strand's contest:  SUCCINCT a single TWO line verse/any theme

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  1. Date: 12/11/2011 7:20:00 AM
    Very nice

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 8:57:00 AM
    so glad to see this made the winner's list. congrats!

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 4:55:00 PM
    I think we've all experienced longings that cannot be answered...congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 10:29:00 PM
    Beautiful, Lori. Congrats on your win. Kim

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 10:32:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem and your win - nicely done..........George

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 5:45:00 AM
    congratulations to you Lori on this win of yours in Brian's contest! nice job of it

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 5:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Succinct" contest Lori. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 2:51:00 AM
    Congrats Lori on your win.Very nice Crystalline.

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 9:38:00 PM
    wow, profound and beautiful at the same time. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 1:50:00 PM
    Very succint. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 12:52:00 PM
    Way to go Lori, nice to see your poem rate top three, Congratulations on your worthy poem.Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 8:31:00 AM
    aww, so sad. why can't it be answered? i like how your title emphasizes the feeling. good luck in the contest :)