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Longevity

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Longevity inherited? Brevity touches many Strong constitution cherished This world without pollution envy Quality of life is a favor ferreted Those who desire quanity and quality plenty Desired to live to a hundred Wired to be one- hundred- twenty Life cut short for mankind, have wondered Someday answers find, scripted plenty When the whole world has been plundered Will longevity belong to any Finis' Contest:Quartets Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst

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Laura Leiser

Date: 7/30/2015 2:57:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sara :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/30/2015 4:03:00 AM

Thought provoking write, Sara. Glad thet you mentioned about the wired to be 120. We are cutting our own lifespan by lifestyles. Not all, but many of us do. Congratulations!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 1:38:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning work Sara! Well yes longevity has indeed a genetic factor associated!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/29/2015 10:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win Sara! ~lee

Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 7:11:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/8/2015 4:15:00 PM

As I look back at the young ones lost, sometimes I just sit and wonder why. I guess time is relative to all yet still unique to each one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2015 9:24:00 AM

wow, deep thoughts, Sara. WE may all be shocked one day to wake up and find it is ending!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2015 1:39:00 AM

Sara, this is a wonderful poem. thank you for sharing. Linda

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/1/2015 5:15:00 AM

PD, You are quite welcome.. Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/26/2015 6:51:00 PM

Well done, Sara, with this difficult rhyme scheme! I started an entry but keep fumbling the middle rhyme...hopefully, I'll get it! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2015 1:07:00 PM

- Yes, one day we will find answers - A wonderful write, Sara :) - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/25/2015 5:46:00 PM

A poem offering quiet reflection on the essence of being human and sharing an experience (aging), intrinsic to our species. Emile.

Milton Robertson

Date: 6/25/2015 7:21:00 AM

A wake up, something to really think about. Beautifully Done Sara. Stay Blessed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2015 9:38:00 PM

a good question, Sara. Kudos to you for taking on this challenge. I have to study out this form!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/24/2015 6:08:00 AM

Not an easy one and I am sure that I don't have the meters right but I tried..It has been on here in contest before..I have forgotten what it is called..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 6/23/2015 7:47:00 PM

Sara, great entry for the contest, 7 and thanks for visiting my Limerick

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/24/2015 6:08:00 AM

You are quite welcome..Sara