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Long Walk To Freedom

,We the nation that survived discrimination building a civilization brand new evolution 94 new birth welcome to earth You fought for our freedom 27 years in prison coz u had a vision of a united nation without the separation or discrimination of race now we able to embrace with ur grace and u deserve to be praised wasn't easy for u for the things u went threw I can't rem the time or what u do but I rem u say that its all for u ,the pillar of the country strength of the nation accusation that they convicted u were innocent in a situation a united nation what u fought for peace to the core is what u are u blead for the dead even thou ur bed was a concrete slab they made u sleep on the floor till u cudnt take no more watching as the waves clashed the shore in robbin island u never hated or retaliated u took it in smile always kept ur head up and moved forward till 1994 u rose up from floor opened a new door to the fellow sA brand new leader 1st black president who was her to represent the entire human race with a smile and embrace the greatest leader ever lived I wonder if u ever had doubt if u thought u ever be the greatest profecy and a ever lasting legacy I can't imagine what they put u threw since they didn't have a clue what u were trying to do and u saved our life from sacrafice 94 years olD and u still going strong I wana be like u but I can do what u did so we tAke our hats off to be proud to be a south african and living with a hero like u and u nelson mandela we praise u we follow u we love you for what u went threw what u did do and u knew we would be free some day and we pay that u stay in our hearts forever and wen we think abt the stormy weather we realise to the point of suprize its a picture perfect moment at this very moment this song is to remind the fellow sa that u made it possible a strong man with a plan who took a stan and I'm ur num 1 fan mr mandela

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Date: 12/17/2013 10:47:00 PM
Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Kiressan , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/8/2013 11:31:00 AM
wow what a write and walk... Kiressan, , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:39:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Kiressan ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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