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Long Shadows

You're feeling both hungry and cold, cruising the crowd, your head hung low. For, when your body's bought and sold, you search faces for tricks you know. Cash casts long shadows on the street in a city devoid of trust. And when innocence needs to eat, morality's sold for a crust. Depression slowly entraps you inside the land of, let's pretend. And because those you trust are few, you curse fate for lack of a friend. Sleep takes an emotional toll when nightmares come; you cannot run. And with hope tucked into your soul, you stir until the night is done. Yet, by beating back fear, you've won a reprieve, surviving the night. And waking to a rising sun, your confidence grows in its light. (Quatrain) 1/7/2015

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Date: 3/8/2018 10:04:00 AM
"And when innocence needs to eat morality's sold for a crust." What a sad truth powerfully exposed. A lot of empathy in this lovely poem, Emile.
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 5/18/2015 1:47:00 PM
EMILE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 5/18/2015 8:56:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/19/2015 4:22:00 AM
A sad poem, but a beautiful show of determination. Great, challenging read. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Scott, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 3:32:00 PM
A sad but truthful message you convey, Emile. Congratulations on your win in this contest. Sandra
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, as always I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 1:41:00 PM
Very nice angle on the contest....really loved the content and message...congratulations on your win
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Donna, I appreciate your warm words. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 12:56:00 PM
Sad one but the truth of it still exist today..Interesting way to go with the contest theme.. Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:07:00 AM
Sara, as always I'm in your debt, thanks. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 12:57:00 AM
A wonderful win, Emile. Nice seeing you all over the contest winning page. SKAT
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thanks so much Skat, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/15/2015 10:28:00 AM
This is so true Emile - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments and your warm hugs. Emile.
Date: 1/7/2015 5:13:00 PM
This is so true...well done!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/7/2015 9:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for your vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile

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