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Long Rest - Contest - See Requiescat By Briton Riviere

Long Rest (Contest entry) (Requiescat by Briton Rivière) Oh master why's your rest so long Command and I'll obey You lay there post your victory And at your side I'll stay I seen them lift you from the field Of combat when you fell My Knight you lay there peacefully Their treatment did you well The soldiers armed from war they lay Your sword apon your chest The peasants come and you they saw Completely battle dressed Their eyes were filled with tears but I Attention will hold true For my commander I will yield Respect that he is due No movement yet, but I will wait Beside this makeshift bed Until the moment you arise To pat me on my head I brace my paws my noble lord In hope that I'll prevail My pride it becons me stand tall Instead my hind legs fail Oh master why's your rest so long Command and I'll obey You lay there post your victory And at your side I'll stay

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Date: 7/19/2013 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful piece of work, Bradley! I truly enjoyed and is one of my favs. Definitely a "keeper"!Well done! Annalise
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Date: 7/19/2013 5:05:00 PM
congrats on you win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/19/2013 4:49:00 PM
Great story that you have imagined to go with the picture..Great flow and rhythm to the work..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:29:00 AM
Bradley, enjoyed... congratulations... Luv~ LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2013 12:49:00 AM
I see you chose a painting with a theme similar to mine. You really made it shine with your poem. WELL DONE and big congrats in the contest.
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Date: 7/18/2013 9:56:00 PM
this is nice.... congrats... luv ~SKAT~ .
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Date: 7/18/2013 6:57:00 PM
Bradley this is outstanding. A well deserve win. Congratulations. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/18/2013 5:31:00 PM
Good job on this poem! It is almost heartbreaking to read of the dog's boundless devotion. I think the patience of the dog describes the painting perfectly. I must also say that your poetic skills are Fantastic!
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:01:00 PM
Im familiar with this picture and you have done a wonderful job describing it and putting such feeling into your description. Im in awe. BG
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