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Long Night

. with light of dawn, a child's fever breaks, and a mother breathes __________________________________

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2016 5:46:00 PM

wonderful ending on this one. Congrats for the win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2016 1:11:00 PM

so beautuful, carrie.. sweet congrats on your award!..huggs

Sarita Milliner

Date: 2/9/2016 5:04:00 PM

I understand this very well! Congratulations!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/9/2016 3:54:00 PM

hashtag ##motherwait #reassurance

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/9/2016 3:47:00 PM

Hello, Carrie, Congratulations on your top rocking win. Stop by my latest blog "How Shocking" if YA like... AN honor to have you support my contest. ~LINDA~

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/9/2016 3:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/9/2016 3:27:00 PM

This is truly inspired, Carrie! Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/26/2013 12:03:00 PM

you knew which buttons to push. congrads

Kiran Bantawa

Date: 11/26/2013 7:29:00 AM

CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/24/2013 9:57:00 AM

Lovely piece,Carrie...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/24/2013 8:48:00 AM

his fever/breaks at dawn-mother smiles :) monoku is simply haiku written 1 line instead of three Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2013 2:21:00 AM

Just wonderful, Carrie. Congrats for your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/23/2013 7:31:00 PM

Congratulations on the fine win,Carrie

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/23/2013 4:59:00 PM

oh yes...have been there many times with the children....good one...congrats on your win :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2013 1:25:00 PM

- Carrie, congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: Hope! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/22/2013 10:13:00 AM

great mom! really its great for a lovely mom.Who's that gifted son? (: ) New Santa.

The Situation

Date: 11/18/2013 8:00:00 PM

a heart wrenching entry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2013 4:40:00 PM

LOVE IT

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/18/2013 4:38:00 PM

the passion of a parent pours out Carrie excellent pen Shadow x smile hug

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/18/2013 3:57:00 PM

I know this dealing w/my nieces. I definitely understand this. Nicely expressed!

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 11/18/2013 3:22:00 PM

† One Can Imagine The Relief In His Mommy's Heart But Better Still, Her Awareness As Vigilence Towards Most Any Preditory Virus Or Not, Which May There After Arrive Slash, Arise ? Very Touching In Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Carrie ˜ Happy Holidays To You, As Always ˜ Love John