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long night

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at dawn's first light, his fever breaks, and a mother smiles
__________________________________ For Yasmin's Contest: Hope

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 12:03:00 PM
    you knew which buttons to push. congrads

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:29:00 AM
    CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Lovely piece,Carrie...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 8:48:00 AM
    his fever/breaks at dawn-mother smiles :) monoku is simply haiku written 1 line instead of three Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 8:19:00 AM
    A mother truly knows Carrie!

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 2:21:00 AM
    Just wonderful, Carrie. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 7:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on the fine win,Carrie

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 4:59:00 PM
    oh yes...have been there many times with the children....good one...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 1:25:00 PM
    - Carrie, congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: Hope! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 1:23:00 PM
    We smile, too! I wish the best! Congrats on a nice win! :) G.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 10:13:00 AM
    great mom! really its great for a lovely mom.Who's that gifted son? (: ) New Santa.

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 6:56:00 PM
    This shows an entire story of love in one fine line, Carrie, you did it again, congrats xxx

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 8:00:00 PM
    a heart wrenching entry.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 4:40:00 PM
    LOVE IT

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 4:38:00 PM
    the passion of a parent pours out Carrie excellent pen Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 3:57:00 PM
    I know this dealing w/my nieces. I definitely understand this. Nicely expressed!

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 3:22:00 PM
    † One Can Imagine The Relief In His Mommy's Heart But Better Still, Her Awareness As Vigilence Towards Most Any Preditory Virus Or Not, Which May There After Arrive Slash, Arise ? Very Touching In Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Carrie ˜ Happy Holidays To You, As Always ˜ Love John