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Long Lost Friend For the first time in forever he took a long look in the mirror. Suddenly his reflection began to come much clearer. The wrinkles on his face and hands around his eyes and brow. Reminders of the yesterdays that he survived somehow. Laugh lines etched into his skin from good times that he knew. Lines of worry ran so deep he thought he'd never make it through. Scars from battles he had fought. One reminder of a fall. A grateful tear fell from his eye he had survived it all. He saw the times that he had grieved and other tears he cried. When somewhere love had reached an end or a loved one that had died. Somehow looking there he saw a heart still on the mend. As he looked into the mirror and found his long lost friend. Edwin C Hofert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/21/2015 4:48:00 PM
This is a well written poem. A beautiful story of a man fidinding himself. I think we all should take a look in the mirror! I'm glad I had the chance to stop by and read this 7 piece. -Alexis
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/21/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Alexis. I could not agree more. God bless! Ed
Date: 5/21/2015 12:29:00 PM
You did it again, huh? You think you're smart huh?. . . . huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huhhuh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh huh
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/21/2015 12:44:00 PM
LOL Did what again? Silly woman LOL
Date: 5/21/2015 9:51:00 AM
Sometimes we look in the mirror and do not see what others see in us as we are so self critical Edwin - love the positivity in the write:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 9:55:00 AM
Soup was on and off recently Edwin - more off than on so comments and reads are down recently:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/21/2015 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Jan!!! Missed you! Hope all is well. There was a couple days I didn't receive any notifications and so I'm going in to see what I've missed! God bless!

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