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Long Good Byes

You left me, oh so, long ago my baby, my only child before I wanted to let go you'd said your first good bye. For you had so much work to do you needed space to grow, and surely could not do so with a fretting mother in tow. My son you walk beside me now rejoined, grown up, a man, trying to explain to me, you're doing the best you can. You didn’t mean to cause me pain such anxiety and fear all of those small good byes were just meant to get you here. The whole world we gave to you and it took a quite awhile to see the sights and sounds around to, wander and compile. Now, you are searching for a wife hope one day to have a child, and as you walk beside me we ponder your learning style. How each of us has our own path which parents can’t walk for them. How children grow to be men that’s what good byes were for then. Contest: The Second Hand Emotion Poet: Debbie Guzzi *Love of a child....emotions sadness /anxiety

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Date: 1/18/2012 12:09:00 PM
Oh wow.....did this one pull the strings of my heart ?! How well I know these feelings....too well, I'm afraid! (x-3!) You've expressed what other mothers struggle to say in their own way...only better and with heartfelt tenderness. Lovely poem, Deb!
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 9:06:00 PM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent write. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:04:00 PM
the pain and love for children must be tremendous. Congratulations to you Debbie
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Date: 7/25/2011 4:27:00 AM
You misted my eyes with these beauty and touched my heart with love,beautiful poem ma : )
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Date: 7/14/2011 10:17:00 PM
i just loved this one. sometimes when you read stuff you are just spellbound because it is exactly what you see. great work.
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Date: 7/14/2011 3:55:00 AM
Deb my son is 26, left to live in Hawaii 13 yrs. ago, now has a a hot wife w/legs that don't quit&son..i told him the frst time he called from Hawaii i said the word good was removd from the term goodbye-your poem, every syllable, every word, every adjective, every line, every stanza was just so "WRITE" on.so you! any parent whose eye's don't moisten from your words then the word "stoic" diminishes the definition...fondly, ~free cee! u cud have writtn my wedding poem for him, ok, better!
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:16:00 AM
Good bye often brings us much closer together. That is a fact.
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Date: 7/12/2011 6:03:00 PM
My son is there, too. Great poem.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/12/2011 6:36:00 PM
Mine is in the Mission District in San Fran is your son in San Fran too? OR just in the same emotional space?
Date: 7/12/2011 3:44:00 PM
Touching dear poet, as I know this goodbye quite well, and fret the day Noah walks his way. At least I have about ten years left ! *smiles* Beautiful and heart felt write Debbie ! Have a wonderful week...much love, james Oh, I left a comment for ya on, "peek-a-boo lexicon".
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Date: 7/12/2011 2:57:00 PM
this was beautiful nicely done thanks for your comments as well cory
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Date: 7/12/2011 11:01:00 AM
From the heart...Very good..hugs
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Date: 7/12/2011 8:54:00 AM
Touching write my dear Debbie.... writing from the heart is always the best way to express....enjoyed ....Michael
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