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Long Flowing Hair

Definitely something about long flowing hair That turns my old crank, no surprise With a face that could even sink a battleship Still her hair makes my temperature rise Can imagine nuzzling my dirty big honker In those long strands of silken flow Takes me far away on some exotic desert island Where hula dancers are putting on a show Wake up each night with my arms outstretched My fingers combing the air softly Wishing upon wish it was not just a dream It's an image that literally rocks me Some people think it has sexual overtones Yet still others call it a fetish But just by writing these words down I find For stirring my libido it's quite effective Definitely something about long flowing hair... © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 11/3/2013 9:48:00 AM
Keep em coming Jack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2013 10:12:00 AM
I'll keep 'em coming if you keep reading 'em! Woo hoo! xoxoxox
Date: 11/2/2013 3:39:00 PM
Kenny...where did the inspiration come for this?????Absolutely sizzling....Caught me by surprise.... ;-) Long thick hair is beautiful....hugs
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Date: 11/2/2013 4:00:00 PM
You got it... sizzling!!! LOL Hair has always been a big asset for me! Don't know where the inspiration came from... hugs xoxoxox
Date: 11/2/2013 11:44:00 AM
Jack, this really strikes a chord. A few men speak of it. All men think of it. I sneak a peak whenever I get the chance. I tried a tail-rhyme, by the way. Mark
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Date: 11/2/2013 11:58:00 AM
I will check it out Mark! I like your comments LOL Much appreciated... never too old eh! :)
Date: 11/2/2013 10:57:00 AM
I second that Jack! Long flowing hair is great, and so is your take on it in this poem -Bravo!!! MC
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Date: 11/2/2013 11:01:00 AM
I'm 78 years old... I should be sitting on an old rocking chair watching little birdies at play! Instead I'm watching big birdies with long flowing hair! LOL NEVER too old! See what's ahead for you....
Date: 11/2/2013 9:07:00 AM
Wait a minute... Don't tell me Cathie is bald!... NAW!... I know better... When you wake up you're combing the wrong person's hair... Should be Cathies'... LOL... Silly Boy!... You tell him Cathie!... Dragon has a little top notch of hair on the top of his head... Quite fetching... All baby dragons have them... I usually put a bow in it... less threatening look... until he opens his mouth and the flames come out... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2013 9:37:00 AM
Do you have long flowing hair or any of your wee friends... Dragon perhaps! LOL xoxoxoxox

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