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Long Before

These feelings inside difficult for me to describe Emotions that flow in our minds will bring us so close in time Like the waves in the ocean The clouds in the sky I wanna hold you forever through everyday of my life Without looking back or ever letting go Strength is what we need to let this love grow Picturing all the days left forever in our path Makes me smile and enjoy this place of passion we’ve kept lying with you until the day I pass Then I’ll look back on all the happiness that’s occurred wondering what would have been if we both wouldn’t have heard the crying of love and passion emitting so deep within our hearts With destiny and fate so strong from the start Listening to those feelings so long ago that erupted from my soul Never forgetting how true love came so long ago

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Date: 10/10/2020 8:33:00 AM
Nice
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Matt Coffelt
Date: 10/10/2020 2:20:00 PM
Much appreciated!!! Honestly
Date: 10/8/2020 12:22:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, Matt - not typical rhythm and metre, but that's what I like about it ... it still has a syncopation that makes me think of my years playing in Funk bands and Jazz ... it holds together, but in an unexpected way. Nicely done, my friend - I will visit your page again! m:o)
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Matt Coffelt
Date: 10/10/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank you for your input! I’m trying to make people feel what I feel Thanks

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